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423.7.5.3  : COHERENCE AND TRANSLATION

 

     It is easy to understand what coherence is if we compare it with cohesion. While cohesion is a surface phenomenon, coherence deals with the connectivity of underlying content. In other words, coherence is a procedure to ensure conceptual connectivity which includes (i) logical relations, (ii) organization of events, objects and situation and (iii) continuity in human experience. To make it more explicit, it deals with basic relations such as cause-effect, problem-solution, temporal sequence etc. For example, consider the structure of a text. It may typically consist of: a thesis, an antithesis and a synthesis; an introduction, the subject, its aspects and examples, a conclusion; a definition of the argument of the title, the pros and cons, and the conclusion; a build-up, a climax and a denouement. Further, a text may have its structure marked by pointers - chapters, headings, sub-headings, paragraphs.

     That is, coherence of a text comprises the configuration and sequencing of the concepts and relation of the textual world dealt within the text. Let us look at structure of the following text, as an example:

 
These are the days of running, kicking and team spirit. This is the age of Scuffed knees and      screped elbows. These are the growing years.
 
So how do you make sure that your children keep their energy after the rigours of sports and      school?
 
Take a cue from little. Arjun's mother
And recharge your kids in one little step.
Introduce them to the egg.
 
An egg is packed with the highest quality protein. Which gives your kids energy.
     Physical, as well as mental. It also helps build their resistance for the
     future.
 
Next, it's rich in Vitamin A, that's good news for eyes and skin. The entire
     Vitamin B group, for good digestion and stable nerves. And Vitamin D for
     strong, sturdy bones.
 
Eggs also have 11 essential minerals. These help the body function normally.
     Like iron for healthy blood. And phosphorous for an active mind and a good memory.
 

Start your kids on eggs today. It will make them leap with joy each and every
     Time.

 

     The first two paragraphs state the problems. In the next two sentences, the solution to the problem is introduced. And the solution is further strengthened in the rest of the paragraphs. Finally the last paragraph makes a suggestion to the reader. The thematic development of the text is explicitly marked by certain cohesive devices. For instance, so in the beginning of the second paragraph. However, even if we remove these markers, the sequencing is fixed.

     The coherence of a text may vary from culture to culture or significantly according to subject matter or textual genre. Then a translator has to recognize the coherence of SLT and judge the coherence of a TT in TL terms.

 
Points to Remember(13f)
 
 
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